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02-12-2011, 11:13 AM
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Fractured
Fractured Splitting hairs Fractured mind Everything came undone Magnitude Overpowering Overwhelming No wonder Its taken a year To recover Awakened Then splintered Senses Aware Uncognizant Effected Unraveled All walls Tumbling down. Too many Questions Unanswered! Slowly Painfully Recovered Puzzle pieces Start to fall In place Now Seeing With Fresh Vision Whole Strengthened!
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02-12-2011, 01:10 PM
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 Very expressive... and the ending is good 
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02-12-2011, 09:39 PM
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That is cool Mika, as said before great ending!
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02-20-2011, 08:31 AM
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Very nicely written.
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