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Old 04-18-2011, 04:07 AM
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alìm livu oe
slä mìkam moe
nì'aw taw a'aw lu
sì 'awa tìvawm hu
sanhì ateng nìwotx

I may be far
but between us
is only one sky
and one darkness
with all the same stars
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Lu fìtxan ftue fwa nitrama tute lu, slä lu fìtxan ngäzìk fwa ftuea tute lu.

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Old 04-18-2011, 09:19 AM
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alìm livu oe
slä mìkam moe
nì'aw taw a'aw lu
sì 'awa tìvawm hu
sanhì ateng nìwotx
Lor nìtxan ma Alyara! I think moe should be oeng, though. Moe is exclusive of the person being addressed. Not too sure about alìm livu oe either. Lu isn't used to express location. Maybe hufwa alìm tok oel?
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Old 04-18-2011, 01:46 PM
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Lor nìtxan ma Alyara! I think moe should be oeng, though. Moe is exclusive of the person being addressed. Not too sure about alìm livu oe either. Lu isn't used to express location. Maybe hufwa alìm tok oel?
I could do something with that, I guess:

oel tivok alìm
slä oengmìkam
nì'aw taw a'aw lu
sì 'awa tìvawm hu
sanhì ateng nìwotx

It doesn't rhyme perfectly, but then I don't require perfection.
Thanks for your comments!
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Old 04-18-2011, 10:59 PM
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I love it! So true too...


...I had to cheat and use the English one.
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