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05-16-2011, 04:06 PM
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These times...
In the moment...
You can't feel yourself, You're numb, And you feel hollow. When you look in the mirror, And you don't... Recognise your own eyes. When you can't hear, Over the deafening noise, That static, life creates to drown your loss. When your body takes no more, No more nourishment, No more thought. Your mind gives in, While your soul... Won't let out. And all the time, you're stuggling And you're fighting, evreything... That it's telling you. Fighting to the inch, With every concievable, Stretch and pull you can force. Scraping and scratching, At the walls of the hole, That you're hopelessly encircled by. Shouting to a person, 'Till rasping voiced... Even though they don't exist. Grasping at lines, imaginary... Anything at all... To pull yourself out. All for a measure of mercy. "What are we going to do?" ("что делать будем?") "Enjoy the moment." ("наслаждаца моментом")
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05-16-2011, 07:52 PM
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oh my! this sound rather desperate & lonely... do you really feel this way?
 (in fact any of my prison pen-pals could have written that (I am in a prisoner helping NGO) - such a degree of despair! Scratching at the walls... what an image... I just wonder what makes you feel like this?
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05-16-2011, 11:52 PM
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This is a nice poem. I hope you're doing alright as well though.
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Always listening to The Orb: O.O.B.E...  My fanfic "The man who learns only what others know is as ignorant as if he learns nothing. The treasures of knowledge are the most rare, and guarded most harshly." -Chronicle of the First Age "Try to see the forest through her eyes." Réalisant mon espoir, Je me lance vers la gloire. Je ne regrette rien. (Making my hope come true, I hurl myself toward glory. I regret nothing.)
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05-17-2011, 05:04 PM
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Thank you so much for reading, and thanks for both of your concerns...
Yes, i'm doing alright at the moment, I just went through a rough patch for a while a few days ago. I don't think i'm completely over with the issue I was struggling with just yet, but it's getting better day by day.
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05-17-2011, 05:09 PM
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05-17-2011, 07:39 PM
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 Well, good to hear that though, but still, I hope things get better.
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05-20-2011, 01:12 AM
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A small "I hope you feel better soon" poem; I don't do Hallmark, but the sentiment is true.
from darkness… deep within, beneath the benthic depths the snow fresh moon awaits to slowly shower down, in pale puffs her brilliance ascendant
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Lu fìtxan ftue fwa nitrama tute lu, slä lu fìtxan ngäzìk fwa ftuea tute lu. It is so simple to be happy, but so difficult to be simple. ~ Guruji
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05-20-2011, 05:57 PM
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Thank you, Alyara, for some very, very beautifully put words... In fact, it brought back a very beautiful good memory of mine.
Thanks for the moment.
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