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Old 08-20-2011, 03:14 AM
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And all at 3am,

The dischordia and the lawlessness,
The complete,
Utter confusion and
Everything inside

Everything

That is possible is made entirely possible in the mire and the mind clouded by the winds.
Wind of time past, time present, time future.

Wind of thought


and

Mists of...
Something un...

unknown?

No longer sh-shall...
L

osi
losi ng

train ogf tohught
adn t- th-e fog..

Obsures- obscures the,


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Thw word form motu
C'an esca--

















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Old 08-20-2011, 03:17 AM
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Really a completely abstract poem from an abstract frame of mind. Not sure this could even be considered as such. Perhaps it's just a collection of symbols placed in the right order.

An attempt to capture the feeling of trying to track a thought as it breifly passes through your vision, then disappears into the mist.

(This was originally going to be a poem, but I lost the words from my fingers, so it became this 'footprint'.)
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Old 08-20-2011, 04:12 AM
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I get that sometimes, interesting to see it put into text.
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Old 08-20-2011, 05:37 AM
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I like it! I like it a lot!
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Old 08-20-2011, 11:44 PM
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Interesting. I understand the idea from the few times I've tried to write something creative
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Old 08-21-2011, 02:22 AM
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I cognize and recognize the feel of the feeling.
So lost,
all at 3am.

Yup.
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