This is Not a Love Song

[Alyara Arati]

Fì'u ke lu tìrol tìyawnä.
Oel ke omum fya'ot a pamrel si fì'ur.
Talun kea tutel alahe
kawkrr ke 'eykolefeiu oer fìtxan teya.

Ha fì'u ke lu tìrol tìyawnä.
Fì'u ke lu lor; ke tsun oe ngivop pamtseot.
Hufwa krr a nga lrrtok si
txe'lan oeyä lam na atan mìfa oe.

Slä fì'u ke lu tìrol tìyawnä.
Fì'u lu ftuea tìngay vitrayä oeyä nì'aw.
Ngari irayo si oe nìtxan;
fì'u to fwa oe sìlpoley tsnì tivel oe.



This is not a love song.
I don't know how to write one.
Because no other person
has ever made me feel so joyful.

So this is not a love song.
It is not pretty; I cannot make music.
Although when you smile
my heart seems like light within me.

But this is not a love song.
It is only the simple truth of my soul.
I am so very grateful for you;
this is more than I hoped to recieve.

[Human No More]

...wow



Beautiful.

[Nantang tirea]

Tsa'u lor That was really baeutiful keep up the good work.

[Alyara Arati]

Thank you ma mesmuk! I wanted to try writing something about love that was not flowery or pretty, but that was made beautiful because of the subject matter and the depth of feeling in it. I'm very glad that you two liked it! Perhaps I didn't do so badly after all.

[Moco Loco]

It's beautiful because it's simple. This is exactly the type of style I love.

[Fkeu'itan]

Really very nice indeed...

I would LOVE to her it spoken in Na'vi.

[Empty Glass]

Originally Posted by Alyara Arati

I wanted to try writing something about love that was not flowery or pretty, but that was made beautiful because of the subject matter and the depth of feeling in it...Perhaps I didn't do so badly after all.

Yeah, this is why I like it too. It's very simple, clear, and sincere. Not badly done at all.

[Alyara Arati]

Irayo ma pxesmuk! I very much appreciate your thoughtful comments. I, too, value this one for it's simple earnestness.