Waiting

[Moco Loco]

When you're upset,
it hits me hard.
There's nothing I can do.
I try not to get upset,
though I can't be with you.
Yet, you make a dull day bright,
a black night bright with stars.
Expecting to search endlessly,
I now know where you are.
A cool breeze in winter,
Rocks on the beach,
The moon hanging over me
just out of reach,
A dark empty highway
going out of town,
Wheelbug nymphs
and worms underground,
Bright early mornings
and falling asleep,
The way to Pandora
and all of my dreams.

[Advent]

A most interesting poem, again.

[Fighter-of-Wars]

Very nice, it gave me a cheerful feeling Whether or not that's what you were going for I dunno.

[Human No More]

I hope so

Beautiful

[Moco Loco]

Yeah, I guess that's what I was going for, like a cheer up kind of poem.

[Human No More]

It works.

[Ateyo leSyaksyuk]

It is whistful and hopeful, therefore enheartening.
(Oh PLEASE ATEYO! NOT SO WORDY)

Nice poem. It makes me feel happy and warm,

[apache_blanca]

Originally Posted by Moco Loco

...The way to Pandora
and all of my dreams.

I am not really into poetry but I like this ^^^sweet.

[Moco Loco]

Thanks It really means a lot, with how much I dream