Grace's Poem

[amitiri]

Peace at last,
Lying here steadfast
In the Great Mother’s arms.

Was it not my time to go?
I guess that I will never know,
I am here stuck in the oblivion.

I hear voices whispery and distant, yet so close
I try to speak out yet I cannot hear, my voice a ghost,
I will remain lost but not forgotten,

In the Great Mothers’ arms.



I guess this poem is a little sad, but I wanted to make Grace's voice live on.
so this is for you Grace.

[Sìkat]

Very, very nice

[amitiri]

thankyou, it was just a moment of inspiration and I had to write it down and share it! Grace must not be forgotton

[Human No More]

I like it

I want to see Grace return though...

[Advent]

I very much like the style you used in that poem. Quite innovative, and yet nice.
Reminds me, I need to write more poetry...

[Niri Te]

I liked the poem a lot Amitiri, please write one about my favorite person in the movie, who will not be in the sequels, Trudy Chacon.
Niri Te

[Moco Loco]

Short and sweet, though acknowledging something sad. I really liked it

[amitiri]

thankyou all, and Niri Te I will write a poem about Trudi when I have a moment of inspiration, this poem just came to me whilst I was wating a snadwich LOL