Fortress Of Ice.

[Silver Storm]

You all write such nice poems!

i used to write a bit too, i would like to share one with you that is very actual again.

Fortress of Ice

It’s nothing but fear
That freezes my heart
With a desire to be free
It makes me feel sad
And slowly kills the joy within me

No freedom in love
No love in my life
But the truth whispers
That the loneliness I have
Is not the freedom I want

Deep within the shadows
That circle in my mind
Glows a spark of love
Fading, but still burning
Waiting for the soul I cannot find

No freedom in love
No love in my life
But the truth whispers
That the loneliness I have
Is not the freedom I want

Now in the dungeons of my realm
I almost feel the warmth of his embrace
Can it be the key to escape?
A sword to slay my demons?
To end those dark lonely days?

My soul now seeks shelter
In this fortress of ice
But still I wonder if
He will ever find me
Before the love inside me dies………………

[Human No More]

*hugs*

[Fkeu'itan]

such beautiful words Silver Storm. Nothing but raw emotion. *hugs*

[Sonoran Na'vi]

Very nice. Nice flow and I could feel the emotion of your poem.

[neytirifanboy]

Such a sad poem. I'm sure I felt that way a few times when I was younger.