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Old 04-04-2010, 12:48 PM
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Default Breakdown.
Love,
Splitting.

Honesty,
Cracking.

Culture,
Splintering.

Respect,
Corroding.

This is our breakdown.

Rebuild.

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A very, very sort poem I wrote a few days ago. Just thought i'd share.
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Old 04-04-2010, 11:11 PM
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Simple, yet straight to the point and completely describing what's going on now.

I like it
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Old 04-05-2010, 02:00 AM
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You keep writing these amazing things. This one is simple but so effective.
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Old 04-05-2010, 01:14 PM
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HNM, ZenitYerkes, thanks to both of you. More will be on the way...
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Old 04-12-2010, 12:53 PM
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Simple, yet straight to the point and completely describing what's going on now.

I like it
couldn't say it better than ZenitYerkis did.

it's strong.
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Old 04-14-2010, 03:10 PM
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Thanks Silver Storm, seems it had the intended effect.
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It certainly reflects effectively your view on the world which seems to be quite pesimisstic. After all, the human world has never been perfect. But then again, perhaps that is an expression of higher expectations.

On the other hand there is hope in the last line.
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Old 04-27-2010, 09:21 PM
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It certainly reflects effectively your view on the world which seems to be quite pesimisstic. After all, the human world has never been perfect. But then again, perhaps that is an expression of higher expectations.

On the other hand there is hope in the last line.
Thank you very much. I'm really glad the emotion behind my poetry shows through.
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