Neytiri Poem. - Tree of Souls

tm20 · #1 05-09-2010, 03:52 AM

Im supposed to be finishing some uni work but I can't be bothered so I thought why not write a poem

. Hanv't written a poem since primary school. BTW I'm just making this up on the spot

Neytiri, Neytiri, why are you so pretty
I'm sad you're not with me, that's just the reality
Your blue skin is bluer than a clear blue sky
There is no substitue for your beauty, you make me feel so high
Your beautiful eyes are like a never ending sea of gold
Without your heart warming smile i feel so very cold
Although I am just a human and I am 6 light years away
I hope that we will meet and fall in love some day ^_^

neytirifanboy · #2 05-09-2010, 12:23 PM

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Originally Posted by tm20

Neytiri, Neytiri, why are you so pretty
I'm sad you're not with me, that's just the reality
Your blue skin is bluer than a clear blue sky
There is no substitue for your beauty, you make me feel so high
Your beautiful eyes are like a never ending sea of gold
Without your heart warming smile i feel so very cold
Although I am just a human and I am 6 light years away
I hope that we will meet and fall in love some day ^_^

Great poem.

I absolutely love it.

I'm always a sucker for Neytiri poetry. This is great in the true nature of Neytiri herself. Simple, but genuine emotion.

tm20 · #3 05-09-2010, 12:41 PM

thanks! here's another since i'm bored

Deadly as a thanator, you strike with all your power
But undescribably beautiful, you stand out like a flower
I only have eyes for you my gorgeous Na'vi princess
No other woman can compare, you make me forget about all the rest
You're like an addictive drug, controlling me deep inside
One look at you sends me on a roller coaster ride
My heart begins to beat so fast and my hands are starting to shake
But after all I am just a dreamwalker and eventually I must awake

neytirifanboy · #4 05-09-2010, 12:54 PM

Really good again. I like your style; lyrical and short.

It's nice to see someone else try some Neytiri poetry. I have done a couple, and Neytiri-Quest has been prolific with good quality Neytiri poetry. But i's nice to see someone else with a different style try their hand.

tm20 · #5 05-09-2010, 12:59 PM

Take me with you my beautiful little Seze, I want to be with you
And show me the beauty along the way as thats all I want to do
The only place I call home is when I look into your golden eyes
Being with you is an incredible journey as everyday is a suprise
Serious as an adult but playful as a child, you're the perfect combination of the two
I am the luckiest guy in the universe to be together with you
The moment I saw you you struck my heart like the pointy tip of a knife
Until we die I will be with you because we are mated for life

neytirifanboy · #6 05-09-2010, 01:10 PM

Cute. Is the poem about Seze or Neytiri? You mention Seze at the beginning, but then the poem starts to be romantic.

tm20 · #7 05-09-2010, 01:14 PM

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Originally Posted by neytirifanboy

Cute. Is the poem about Seze or Neytiri? You mention Seze at the beginning, but then the poem starts to be romantic.

seze actually means blue flower, so neytiri is described as a beautiful little flower

neytirifanboy · #8 05-09-2010, 01:23 PM

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Originally Posted by tm20

seze actually means blue flower, so neytiri is described as a beautiful little flower

Ah, OK it makes complete sense now. But just be warned that the poem may seem confusing to ignorants like me. Although all is explained in this post. some, like myself, may think you were talking about Neytir's Ikran rather than Neytiri herself.

tm20 · #9 05-09-2010, 01:54 PM

HAHAHAHAHA now that would seem kind of... wrong

Human No More · #10 05-09-2010, 03:28 PM

Nice...

I wish I could write like that.