Love Rekindled.

[Na'vi taw'ite]

Originally Posted by Unil_mi_tokx

Your imagery is as crystal clear as the movie. I can easily depict all the action, down to the color...I can't wait to read more.

Originally Posted by Fkeu'itan

I have to say, it's very well written, the imagrey is fantasic and the language is too. That surely is an "interesting" pairing, but it's nothing I can't handle, personally...

And I quote Unil_mi_tokx and Fkeu'itan for truth.

Technically, your sentence structure is spot on; the way you've broken up your writing makes it very easy to clarify what's happened.

On an artistic bent, I love how descriptive your prose is. (Your writing hearkens me back to all those "creative writing" assignments back in high school!) Your words easily trigger the movie projector in my head and just like the two posts above, I can so clearly "see" what's going on.

By the way, just as "Kxani Yawne" romantically brought together two female Na'vi, I see nothing wrong with exploring the romantic relationship between two male Na'vi.

Aaaaand I'll start the chant:

Moar...