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Old 05-16-2010, 04:15 AM
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...ah...

I thought you were male
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Old 05-16-2010, 04:39 AM
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I thought you were male
He is. JUST LIKE MEH.
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Old 05-16-2010, 04:42 AM
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Chapter 4:
Waking peacefully, Tsu’tey groaned as he sat up. Glancing around, he realized he had fallen asleep in the tent, on the hammock where Jake had slept. Tsu’tey stood up, and walked out of the tent, the warm morning air washing over him. Jake was apparently nowhere to be seen, but Tsu’tey knew where he would be, if he needed to think, he could only go to that one place.

“Hometree”
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Grace hadn’t stayed long at the village; she had woken up in the early hours of the morning, to catch the last glimpse of the bioluminescence. She thought back to the “Survival Guide” and the quote she had written at the beginning: “There are many dangers on Pandora, and one of the subtlest is that you may come to love it too much”

“Just look at us now, we rebelled against the RDA, pushed them off the planet. Yeah, I think we love this planet too much, but you know what? I just don’t care.”

Walking through the trees towards Hells Gate, she glanced at the horizon where Hometree used to stand, sighed inwardly, and kept walking towards Hells Gate.

“This is going to be a long day”
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Gazing out over Hometree, lying there without any sound. Jake gave a huge sigh of relief, knowing that he felt something for Tsu, just not knowing what it was. His mind was a blur of feelings, feelings he just couldn’t seem to read. He felt like a little kid trying to reach the top shelf for the candy, always trying, but never reaching it. Turning around, he found himself staring into the eyes of another, one that he had not expected to see.

“Eytukan?”
--
As Tsu’tey crept towards Hometree’s felled form, his ears perked up to the sound of an argument. Knowing both the voices, Tsu’tey’s heart began to pound against his ribs.

“You can’t control me, and you can’t control him!”

“You misunderstand; I’m not seeking your approval here. You WILL be controlled, and so will He.”

“You can try”

“Do not tempt me to kill you Jake Sully, I will do so without hesitation”

Hearing flesh strike flesh, Tsu’tey stood up, shaking with rage. He jumped out into the open and growled:

“Leave. Him. Alone.”

Eytukan turned; malice ablaze in his eyes, and simply said:

“Or what?”

Tsu’tey growled, and charged Eytukan, knocking him off his feet. Eytukan didn’t resist, and didn’t try to defend himself from the punch that Tsu aimed at his face. As soon as he had hit him, Eytukan lashed out at Tsu’tey, knocking him back. Eytukan stood slowly, merely smirked, and gave a fleeting remark:

“You will be such a loss to the clan”

Tsu’tey growled, crouching protectively over his love’s prone form, breathing heavily.

“Don’t....ever....touch him....ever again.”

“I won’t, but don’t think you will be either”

Eytukan turned and sprinted off towards the village, but Tsu’tey didn’t care. Kneeling down next to Jake, tears started to stream down his face.

“Jake....Jake....wake up....please”
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Purple....everything was purple....purple fog...

Jake eyes opened wider, and the same purple fog obscured his vision. He moving along the same path he had taken the last time, seeing images of Tsu’tey. Although, this time, they flashed slower, he could appreciate details. Even the fog seemed less alien, it was almost familiar. Moving towards the end, he saw the two people embracing again. The purple fog that covered them was lifted somewhat, letting Jake see more of the other person...Still couldn’t make out who it was, but he had a pretty good idea...
The smoke swirled again, bringing Jake into the limbo he was almost accustomed to now.

“Jake, you know the other I spoke of”

“I know who he is, that doesn’t make it any easier to live it”

“He loves you Jake, you know that. You should love him back”

“Help me Neytiri; I can’t see me with him”

“I said this to you once, a very long time ago. No one can teach you to See”

Jake could feel himself waking from the dream, and hearing Neytiri getting further and further away was too much to bear. The purple was disappearing, being replaced by a black veil that drowned out all the sound, all the feeling....everything.
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Mo’at watched as her husband returned to the village, a nasty mark on his face. He ran to the centre of the village, stood next to the Vitraya Ramunong and spoke words Mo’at refused to believe:

“Ma smuké, ma smukan, Jake has been lost at Hometree, and Tsu’tey has attacked me. You heard what they were planning, yesterday when they confessed to each other. You know they can’t be allowed to do this, it could jeopardize the Omaticaya. I have removed them from the clan. Should they return, they will be killed”

Mo’at just stared at Eytukan, at the fires in his eyes. The clan couldn’t see this deep into his soul, but she was Tsahik, she could read people better than most, and Eytukan was her mate. The clan roared in approval, and Eytukan stepped down from the Tree of Souls. He retreated to a far corner hammock, just like the night before. Mo’at only knew of one other ex-uniltěranyu....Grace Augustine. Mo’at knew where she would be, but she feared to tread that way, she feared the old tawtute base.

“No one else will help me; no-one else can see what is happening. I will go there. For Jake and Tsu’tey’s sake”

She started to walk in the direction of Hells Gate.

(TBC)
This one took a while didn't it guys? <3
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He is. JUST LIKE MEH.
Then technically he's not a fangirl

hmm, new chapter. Will read it now.
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Hope you liked it! <3
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Very good Txon. As always, keep up the good work. Very much looking forward to another chapter. I won't say "MOAR!" because I don't want to rush you...








MOOOOOAAAAAAAAR!!!!
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Old 05-16-2010, 03:31 PM
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MOOOOOAAAAAAAAR!!!!
Yay, I have another moar. Maybe if I get another one, Ill write chapter 5 tonight
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Chapter 4! *flails* Still absolutely amazing ^_^ I'm even more hooked...keep it up
What are they going to dooo?


*whispers*...moar?
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Another Masterpiece Jack...Keep it up!

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Old 05-16-2010, 04:07 PM
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Im glad everyone loved it, and yes, moar is coming. Im not rushing it though, I might start chapter 5 tonight, Im not saying it will be completed. <3
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And I'm on the hook...

MOAR
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No words will suffice to fully capture what I'm feeling...




except "MORE"!
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Thanks guys, you're a real inspiration to keep writing MOAR.
Chapter 5 soon.
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Thanks guys, you're a real inspiration to keep writing MOAR.
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I just read chapter three and i will be reading chapter 4 soon! I LOVE IT SO FAR! i cannot wait to see what happens
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