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05-19-2010, 11:31 PM
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*fanman hug* Gawd, Im sorry its been so long since a chapter, (Sunday Morning 5am) But expect another tomorrow. <3333
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05-20-2010, 11:21 PM
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Chapter 5:
Tsu’tey awoke to Jake staring at him intently; “Tsu?” “Yes, Jake?” “We won’t be going back to the clan will we....” “Kehe, ma tsmukan....” Jake sighed and stood up, still gazing at Tsu’tey “Pxasik!” Screamed Jake Tsu’tey raised himself off the floor, and hugged Jake tightly. Jake seemed to tense up for a second, before letting Tsu’tey hold him gently. They stayed like that for what seemed like an eternity, Jake breathed the words “I love you too” Tsu’tey’s heart froze; blood supposed to be running to his vital organs seemed to rush towards his cheeks. “Really? I thought I was crazy to even thi—“ Tsu’tey didn’t finish his sentence; Jake had embraced his love in a tight hug, and planted his lips on Tsu’tey’s. Holding each other for a few seconds, Jake pulled back and whispered: “Answer your question?” Tsu’tey could do nothing but blush and smirk, and Jake was smiling warmly at him. Every part of Tsu felt alive with love, and he just couldn’t stop smiling. Slowly he uttered the words “What will we do now Jake?” “I know just the person to see” “Who?” “Grace” -- Mo’at stumbled through the trees towards the gate of the tawtute base, breath coming in rasping gasps; she put her back to the cold stone still surrounding the base and groaned aloud: “Faysawtute” Pushing through the ajar gate, she wandered towards the only building with lights twinkling inside. -- Eytukan awoke, knowing what he had done. He swung his legs out of the hammock, and feeling very pleased with himself, walked towards where he thought Mo’at would be. Striding into the tent, he looked over at Mo’at’s hammock, saw that it was empty and thought nothing of it. She always awoke early to check on the Clan members, and then she would wander off into the forest. Sometimes not returning all day, but Eytukan wasn’t worried at all... But there was that one possiblity... -- Grace was in the beginning stages of growing the Avatars, a very complex process involving splicing Na’vi DNA with some Human DNA so the Human could link correctly to the Avatar. She saw a lone Na’vi enter the compound, and activated a camera. Zooming in, she saw it was Mo’at! “What in the name of....She would never come here. Never. Something is wrong” Grace groaned; this day was turning out just like she had planned. She had some spare time, why not solve a crisis or two? “Still a long day.” Opening the science block door, she walked down to greet Mo’at. -- Jake’s mind hadn’t been at peace for so long, it was almost surreal to him. Walking through the forest to Hells Gate with Tsu held close, he entered a state of nirvana. All the problems in the world seemed to melt away, and for that short time, things like not belonging with the Omaticaya meant nothing to him. He just wanted to be with the one he loved, anything else was trivial to his interests. Jake gazed at Tsu and felt nothing but absolute love for him. “Tsu’tey?” “Srane?” Jake hugged him again, and kissed him gently on the forehead, before continuing walking towards Hells Gate. -- “Ok, Ok, Slow down. Jake has disappeared, and Tsu’tey attacked Eytukan?!” Mo’at responded in broken English: “Srane, Tsu’tey told his love for Jake last night” “Wait...what?” Grace collapsed into her chair, massaging her temples. She was a scientist, not a relationship councillor for God’s sake. “Do you believe Tsu’tey would attack Eytukan unprovoked?” “Kehe. Rutxe” “Mo’at, I’m not the best person to deal with relationships, you don’t know me very well” “I am sorry Grace Augustine, But you are uniltìranyu, just like Jake” “That doesn’t make me understand what’s going through his head!” Mo’at began to respond, but at that very moment Jake burst through the door holding Tsu’tey’s hand and began to speak: “Grace, Tsu’tey was protecting me from –“ Grace rolled her eyes, stood up and shouted “Can everybody just shut up a damn second?!” Silence....just silence. Grace tried to savour the moment, before sighing heavily and breathing the words “Jake, I know what you’re going to say, I’ve been told by Mo’at here already. So there’s no need to come bursting in telling me what you and Tsu have been up to for the past night” Tsu’tey blushed deeply, and shuffled behind Jake a little. “Now, what we need to figure out is what the hell Eytukan is doing. I don’t see anything wrong with you two loving each other, but as we have learned Jake, there are intolerant people on Earth, seems it’s on Pandora as well.” Jake sighed, and nodded his head. Showing the mark on his face he replied to Grace; “He hit me right here, and Tsu’tey leapt out to defend me” Tsu’tey’s blushing doubled, and he had completely moved behind Jake by then, hiding himself from Grace gaze. Mo’at stood, and walked over to the window, staring out over Pandora’s surface, her expression sharpened. “They’re here.” “Who is?” “The Clan” (TBC) Yaaaaaaaaawn, I hope you enjoyed that one guys. I enjoyed writing it. I know it took a while, but as you can probably tell, it was a crucial chapter, and needed to be written right. <333 Chapter 6....is coming. <33 COMMENT BELOW!
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05-20-2010, 11:41 PM
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You wanted a reaction? Here's one: "Aaaaaaargh!"
I started reading this sitting on the edge of my sofa, my laptop on the coffee table. As I continued reading, the angle of my body went from 90 degrees to the ground and started leaning toward my laptop...further and further. At the end, I was about ready to topple over. This thing is more addictive than some of those silly daytime dramas I used to follow when I was younger. At least with the daytime dramas, I knew I could see another episode during the week. But now I'm left asking, "When will I get to read... MOAR?" 
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05-20-2010, 11:47 PM
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  Now, for me. Sleepzorz. Ill see you guys tomorrow. <33
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#53
05-22-2010, 09:11 AM
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Ok, you zombies calling "MOOOOOOOARR"
Chapter 6 is being planned - Might take a while from now on. The chapters have to be purrrrfect... < See what I did there?  So yeah, I don't know about time of release. But you'll see soon enough.
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#54
05-23-2010, 08:27 PM
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That's quite a cliffhanger
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05-26-2010, 11:25 AM
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I actually want to find out what happens
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#59
05-26-2010, 10:37 PM
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Chapter 6:
Tsu’tey couldn’t believe this was happening. He frantically looked at the faces of Jake, Mo’at and Grace, all staring intently out of the window. “What are we going to do?” Muttered Tsu’tey Grace glanced over at him, shook her head and slumped into her chair again. “What the hell is he doing? I didn’t know the Omaticaya could be this arrogant!” Mo’at simply sighed, growling the words “ayskxawng and fayvrrtep” under her breath, and walked down the stairs to the exit. Tsu’tey nearly leapt after her, but a hand grabbed him on the shoulder. Turning around he was gazing into Jake’s eyes...again. He merely shook his head and sat down looking out of the window, watching Mo’at walk across the old concrete towards the swarming clan at the gate. Tsu’tey moved to his side and gazed after Mo’at. -- Eytukan observed his mate walking over to him, Mo’at had an angry scowl on her face, and most of the clan retreated a few steps in sheer respect for their Tsahik. Not Eytukan though, he knew what she was doing, she was trying to defend this monstrosity between Jake and Tsu’tey. He smirked at her and shouted mockingly: “You want to be with the mutants? Enjoy your time with them then!” To this the rest of the clan sniggered, but Mo’at’s eyes continued to burn with a bright fury that went un-subdued by Eytukan’s taunts. The clan picked up on Mo’at’s fury, and continued to move backwards, slowly but surely as Mo’at prowled towards them. Mo’at moved right up on Eytukan, and snarled in his face: “What are you all doing here!? You have NO right to come looking for these two, and you have NO right to come looking for me!” Eytukan’s confidence dulled, Mo’at’s commanding authority was winning the clan over from right under him. “We came to take you away from these mutants; they will infect you with their shared sickness!” Mo’at merely smirked at Eytukan; fear mongering was one of his tactics, to scare everyone else into agreeing with him. “No, they will not. They think differently to you Eytukan, and I fear you have lost your sight” The entire clan recoiled in shock, and Eytukan and Mo’at just stared at into each other’s eyes. The line had been drawn, sides had been taken. The Omaticaya was splitting. Eytukan seethed with anger, so much so that you could almost see the venom in his glare at Mo’at. Mo’at’s returning stare was one of indifference, there was no anger, and there was no love. She looked at Eytukan with zero feeling. Mo’at knew she had overstepped the mark, but she didn’t care. There were two sides now. Giving Eytukan and the clan one last withering look, she turned and started to walk back towards the Hells Gate science block. -- Jake and Tsu’tey had observed this through the cameras around Hells Gate. Of course, they didn’t have any audio, so they got about half the story. Jake knew what had happened. He could see the pure venom in Eytukan’s eyes, and the indifference in Mo’at’s. Tsu’s face was grim; he knew that there wouldn’t be an end to this any time soon. Grace rose from her chair, walked over to the nearest water source, poured herself a glass of water. Turning around, she sighed and said in a typical sarcastic fashion: “Cmon Troops! Let’s save the Omaticaya’s pride!” Rolling her eyes, she stalked off to open the door for Mo’at. Jake turned to Tsu, and pulled him into a hug. Tsu’tey let out a little cry when Jake pulled him, but soon they just stood there, in complete silence. The world slid away, leaving just the two of them, in their moment. One they would share together. Forever. Jake smiled at his love, and they walked down to greet Mo’at, hands held. -- Eytukan continued to stare at the tower, contemplating charging it and killing all of the people inside. But he couldn’t. The Clan weren’t fully behind him, and he still loved Mo’at. He would retreat, and leave them to their own devices....For now. -- Mo’at, Tsu’tey, Jake and Grace. They all sat in the lower part of the Science lab, contemplating their next move. Mo’at spoke scarcely, if at all. Grace was being her typical moody self, and Jake and Tsu’tey just hugged a lot. Finally, Jake spoke up: “So....What are we going to do, we can’t camp up here for the rest of our existences! We have to either win over Eytukan, or....” Jake drifted off into deep thought, and every occupant of the room knew what he was thinking. Mo’at stood, looked straight into Jake’s eyes and slowly whispered: “Kill Eytukan?” The entire atmosphere of the room changed, even Grace stopped with her churlish expressions and snapped her attention to Jake’s face. Jake felt his cheeks getting hotter, and tried to speak, stuttering, and back peddling as fast as he could. Tsu’tey stepped up, put a hand on Jake’s shoulder, and said slowly and strongly to Mo’at: “If he won’t let us be who we are inside, it will come to that.” (TBC) Wooo, that was highly enjoyable. Written to The Last Train Home By Lostprophets. Also, new important info. I'm going to be releasing a chapter every Wednesday night. Although sometimes that may be impossible. I will try my best though guys. (Oh, and the final few chapters will be exempt from that time schedule, they need to be...epic.) Love you!
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