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06-16-2010, 05:17 PM
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Automatic Poem.
Red soil, blue sky,
green view, white cloud. Clear air, Mountain breeze, Human warmth. Can I say I have lived? Can I say I will live on the land of concrete? Can I say they exist further away from the screen's light? Can I aspire to something big on the pale blue dot? Will I be rich, wise warmhearted? Perhaps have a villa, a million friends? Know the secrets within the dark shadows of reality? Will I live or am I dreaming? --- A surrealist method to write poems: just put down the first coherent sentence you have in mind. It ended up like this, and I liked the final result. What do you think?
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Last edited by ZenitYerkes; 06-16-2010 at 05:35 PM. 
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06-16-2010, 05:19 PM
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Ooo! very nice. I liked it a lot, it had a lot of emotion to it and I could relate.
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06-16-2010, 09:07 PM
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Hah, thanks
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06-17-2010, 01:31 AM
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Very good Zenit.
It remains a questioned to be answered in many people today.
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