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Continuation here Notes: Atrum is the Latin word for Dark.
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Last edited by ZenitYerkes; 03-26-2010 at 09:17 AM. |
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Very unique piece of fiction. I won't lie when I say that I would very much like to read more of this.
Please, finish it I like your style of writing
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i just got chills man. thats AWESOME.
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It sure gave me the chills .. Nice work man
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I liked it too, ZenitYerkes, please continue it!
I find it totally related to what we are doing to ourselves and to our own planet.
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nice style - did you write it ?
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Thanks people for the comments! It means a lot for me, really
![]() I'm going to update it several times and see if I can complete it by the end of the next week.
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Last edited by ZenitYerkes; 03-21-2010 at 02:09 PM. |
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I like this a lot ZenitYerkes, a very nice style of writing.
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Zenit, that was beautiful. I want to see more of the story
. Please upload the rest.
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Second update. I'm not sure if the story is going in the way I intended it to be; I mean I know what to put but not in which order. I'll need to think over it this night.
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Last edited by ZenitYerkes; 03-21-2010 at 09:34 PM. |
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An amazing piece of work, I would read more
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I need advice people: should I take out the trial and keep going on with the "original style"? I mean that until the last update it was kind of poetic and now turned out to be narrative.
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i like it well written, and idk it sounds great with both togather if you ask me
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I like it the wayt it is, although keeping it poetic couls be quite nice aswell
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Tane-Mahuta (God of The Forest) Namaste -- "the Divinity within me perceives and adores the Divinity within you." "Kia Hora te Marino Kia Whakapapa Pounamu te Moana Kia tere te Karohirori I Mua to Huarahi May the calm be widespread May the sea glisten like that of greenstone May the shimmering light guide you on your journey" |
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Yes, very nice ZenitYerkes. Looking forward to more updates.
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