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07-17-2010, 10:28 PM
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Ok people who read this:
Chapter 12 IS being written, I haven't dropped this Fiction. As you can probably judge from the last sentances in Chapter 11, its an important chapter. Keep watching. Thanks for being patient. <3
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07-25-2010, 12:39 AM
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Chapter 12:
Present Time -- Tsu’tey awoke along the riverbank, where he had collapsed. Head throbbing like crazy, he stood up slowly. The eerie glow of Polyphemus reflecting off the water to his right, he stumbled into the river as if to rinse off the headache he had. “Why am I down here? Why did I leave Jake?” Tsu’tey inquired to himself Memories came flooding to him, some of them not his own. Tsu’tey struggled with them for a moment or two, before they all slot into place in his mind, like a jigsaw. From a third person perspective, he watched Jake turn and look at the Vitraya Ramunong, felt Jake’s thoughts. Tsu’tey’s eyes widened in horror, Jake had gone back to the clan?! Stumbling toward the bank of the river, he collapsed once again. “This is madness, why can I see what Jake has done?” Usually Tsu’tey would put this down to the mental connection the People shared when they performed Tsahaylu. The connection lasts a lifetime. Jake and Tsu’tey had not made the bond, and Tsu could not understand why he felt he had. Putting these thoughts to one side, the struggled to his feet, remembering vaguely the direction the clan had been in, he started to walk. -- 30 minutes earlier -- Hisses pierced every section of Jake’s flesh. The very people he had sought to protect, giving him so much hate, it burned his heart to keep walking. To control the anger that seethed through every fibre of his being. Jake glared towards the centre, to where Eytukan sat atop his throne. Lines of hate scorched Eytukan’s face; Jake could practically see the anger flowing through his veins. Jake decided to hold his head up, and walk proudly towards Eytukan. It was better than staring at the floor, walking slowly towards his enemy, if he did that, it would seem he had succumbed, and come crawling back. -- Grace had returned to where they had left Jake, to find him gone. Tsu’tey was gone too. Mo’at and she looked around the vicinity of the campsite, and couldn’t find either of them. “Probably gone to play hide and seek in the bushes...” Grace sniggered, and perched herself on a rock. The emptiness of Pandora suddenly struck her; it was just her and Mo’at here. The need to find Jake and Tsu’tey doubled in her head, for no apparent reason other than to have other people with her. -- Jake was standing ten feet away from his worst enemy, whilst the screams, hisses and yells of his former friends echoed around him. “You came back, we told you to stay away, we told you death would come to you if you returned, and you have.” Eytukan shouted, not just to Jake, but to his entire audience of supporters. “YOU came after US. We left, we were ok, and you came and tried to bring the entire clan down on us.” “You have taken my mate, You still hold her!” “She chose to come with us, maybe you should think about the things that implies!” Roars of anger erupted from the horde of people surrounding him. Eytukan’s eyes widened slightly, and then he spoke, the hate dripping from every syllable. “You are wrong.” “I’m wrong? Go and ask her yourself, vrrtep!” The crowd became deathly silent; Jake could hardly believe he had just done it. He had insulted Eytukan, but it felt good. “I am the Demon? You are the insult to Eywa, wanting to mate with males!” Growls of approval swept through the crowd like a breeze, and before Jake noticed, they were gone. “I wonder where your irrational HATRED of this comes from. What is this going to do to the clan if I and Tsu’tey love each other?” “Your disease could infect others, and soon, the Omaticaya would die out!” Jake hissed and clenched his fists. “SKXAWNG! WHY, WHAT IS IT WITH YOU? MO’AT ACCEPTED IT, OTHERS HAVE, WHY CAN’T YOU?!” “BECAUSE IT INFECTED ME!” -- Present Time -- Grace and Mo’at converged on the Clans campsite, not knowing that Tsu’tey was doing exactly the same thing. Distant yells could still be heard; Mo’at glanced at Grace, wide eyed. “I can feel the anger from here Grace. What has happened to the united people?” “I don’t know Mo’at, but we’re not going to know from here.” Tsu’tey heard the same yells and shouts, and moved closer to the noise... -- “What the hell do you mean it infected you?” Eytukan’s eyes widened in horror, the entire clan was staring at him in shock. “I....I...” Jake smirked, in spite of himself. “You loved a male too, didn’t you? Or maybe you still do.” Eytukan stood speechless, trying to decide between denying it, and confessing everything. “Who is it?” None of the people were aware that three other people were listening in on this entire fiasco from a few metres away. “Who WAS it?” Eytukan didn’t respond; he just glared at the ground. Jake walked closer to Eytukan and yelled the words Tsu’tey had spoken to him when he was taming his first Ikran. “Txopu ra’a’si Tsamsiyu!” Eytukan immediately looked up, anger deep in his eyes again, so much that Jake took several steps backwards. “WHO IS IT?!” “It was Tsu’tey.” A scream emanated from the nearby brush, and Tsu’tey stood up, tears of horror and realization streaming down his face. “How could you?!” (TBC) Holy SHEEP that took a long time didn't it guys? Well, I had to be sure where I was going with this. I'm very very appriciative of your patience, thanks! Written to - Bunch of Eminem Songs ^_^Also, wow, nearly 2k views? Wow. Just wow. I'm honoured. <3 LOVE YOU GUYS!
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07-25-2010, 12:46 AM
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EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEKKKKKKKK
*choke* Holy **** Jack!....I mean - Wow O.O What the hell is going to happen next....Dare I saw MOAR! AWESOME Chapter Jack....As always ~Mark xxxxxxx
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Im bloody KNACKERED now! *Zzzzzzzzzzzz IZ NEEDED*
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07-25-2010, 12:59 AM
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 amazingly done  , honestly I didn't expect that from Eytukan, anyways ... once again another chapter that I read ... another chapter that I like  
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*In Hippy Voice* "Duuuude, you can't go reading fanfics like this at 10:30am...the man will knock you down!"
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07-25-2010, 10:34 AM
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But man... I mean... that sh*t. It was some of the best sh*t i've ever read dude! I'm totally trippin'!
*flails his arms around, trying to catch the multi-coloured butterflies* WOOOOOOOOOOOOW!
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Thanks for the comments guys, you're awesome! 
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07-25-2010, 12:02 PM
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*fans himself, swishes hair*
Oh. I know. I'm awesome. But seriously. As always, it's epic, epic writing. Can't wait to see what you have in store.  Please sir, can I have some MOAR?!?!?!?!
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07-25-2010, 04:29 PM
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OMG that was such a Twist 8D HIS OWN DAMNED SON XD
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