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07-05-2010, 10:09 PM
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Everything Comes To A Full-Stop.
Forcively.
Undesired. Unneeded. Pain. Necessary. Questioned. Realised. True. Focussed. Confused. Varied. Lost. Repositioned. Recollected. Reformed. Returned. Back. -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Yeah, it's weird, but i'm in a weird mood. 
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08-05-2010, 05:34 AM
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Nice. I like the use of single words in order to provide more impact within a minimum space (especially the use of single syllable words at the end of each stanza)...
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Because a could-be is a maybe that is reaching for a star. I would rather be a has-been than a might-have-been, by far, For a might-have-been has never been, but a has was once an are". -Milton Berle
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