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08-05-2010, 05:34 AM
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Nice. I like the use of single words in order to provide more impact within a minimum space (especially the use of single syllable words at the end of each stanza)...
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"I would rather be a could-be if I cannot be an are,
Because a could-be is a maybe that is reaching for a star. I would rather be a has-been than a might-have-been, by far, For a might-have-been has never been, but a has was once an are". -Milton Berle 
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