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Old 08-22-2010, 06:23 PM
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Default The Avatar Fan Art of La'ri... ^^

Hello I like it, to avatarize some persons (Mostly prominents) and now I will show you some of my work!

My newest avatarization ^^

Perhaps, you can give me some tips, to become better...


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Old 08-22-2010, 06:52 PM
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First of all, really, really cute!

It looks awesome, however, there are some details that could be improved.

Some tips:

- Make the stripes smoother, more AA - right now they look too pixelated.
- The nose should be wider
- the eyes are too blurry compared to the rest of the face

Other than that, awesome work!
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Old 08-29-2010, 12:33 PM
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Thank you very much ... also, for your tips! I will account for it, for the next time.

I've tried to make the eyes more clearly. Does it looks better, now? (See above) Besides, I have the feeling, that the Na'vi is cross-eyed But she peered on the original, aswell ^^

You are right with the critic of the nose and the stripes. But I was to stupid to advance it... I will account for it, for the next time

Here is annother avatarization. But it is already older...

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Old 08-29-2010, 06:05 PM
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So Pretty!

Kind of makes you want to get up and give her a big warm furry hug!
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Old 08-30-2010, 06:35 PM
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Thanks

Here is annother one. It's not so good, I guess...

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Old 08-31-2010, 02:10 AM
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Very nice, the stripes on the bottom of the face are excellent, the ones on top are a bit of a sharp contrast.

I like it though!
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Woah! Nice work, that takes some doing
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Old 08-31-2010, 05:36 PM
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That latest looks like a framiliar cat I know...

hmm
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Old 09-23-2010, 06:44 PM
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Thanks

Apollo: Haha xD Yes, you're right

Here is a new one:

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Very nice work!
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Beautiful and great work indeed!
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Kind of makes you want to get up and give her a big warm furry hug!
^This.
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Old 12-13-2010, 05:14 PM
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Thanks

A new one:

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Old 12-14-2010, 01:30 AM
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This one is your best yet, I think
The markings look a lot more blended with the skin and the hair looks like it was part of the original photo
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Old 12-25-2010, 12:23 PM
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Thanks =)

Now, I want to show you my first 3D Animation. I know... The video ist VERY short, but I'm proud of it, anyway. I hope, you like it.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rf09xmbdGUU
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