Avatar Fanfiction: "The Verdant Stanger". Chapters 1 -5

[Raiden]

Originally Posted by joeylovesgaia

Very good, if a little Marty Stu-ish. Just like a Saturday morning superhero show. Karmic justice-- let's see how those corporate greedballs and bloodthirsty mercenaries like being on the wrong end of superior technology!

On the other hand, the Na'vi still can't defend themselves, and that's kind of a let down. There's a story, post-movie, where Jake arms the Na'vi. It's part of a series by Zura on FanFiction.Net

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Zombie thread!

Thanks for the thoughts, but I've all but canned this one. Raiden, truth be told, is a character from a very different project I have been working on. One day I imagined how it would be if he intervened in one of the battles in Avatar, and I eventually decided to write a fanfic about what might happen if there was some sort of crossover.

I had the plot all set up, but I would have had to do something to fix the power gap between Raiden and the other characters, which would ultimately be impossible.

Raiden, as a character, has also changed a lot. I was mainly writing this to get a feel for what Raiden should be like in a combat/espionage situation, and in his world, he has much, much more to worry about than a few hundred white-bread mercenaries.

I am actually working out the kinks in a plot for a new Avatar fanfic, and this time, I'm going keep things more or less like they were in the movie technology-wise and character-wise.