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= not a troll
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Chapter 9:
Jake couldn’t sleep that night; evil dreams haunted his nights, like threads of cobwebs that would never blow away. Sitting up in the hammock he and Tsu’tey shared, he groaned and stepped down onto the cold floor. Glancing around the room they inhabited, he realized how much of a luxury Hells Gate had been. All of the members of their little group crowded into one small room, the ambient mood was one of general angst and sadness. Morale had been pretty low lately; Grace had nearly yelled Jake’s head off when he told her that they had to leave Hells Gate. Sighing inwardly, he walked over to the room’s entrance, and gazed out over the edge of the cliff. -- Eytukan woke up with a start, staring silently at the roof of the tent he now dwelled in alone. His dreams quickly dissipating, like mist in a strong wind. Soon his only thought was: “I am alone.” Quickly this thought vanished too, and only an all consuming anger filled him. It was their fault, again. They took her away from him. They were lucky enough to love each other, to feel the same things for one another. Why didn’t that happen to him?! -- The teenage clan members had returned to the clan, and been welcomed with open arms. Not one of the clan suspected espionage. Ner’zhul didn’t know how on Pandora he was going to find out why Eytukan hated Jake and Tsu’tey so much, or what kind of tactical plans they were planning. Jake and his friends had moved, so any plans against them at Hells Gate were redundant. Provided they could not fight amongst themselves at their new location, they wouldn’t be found for quite some time. Ner’zhul casually strutted around the Vitraya Ramunong like every person did at his age. He was less arrogant than all of them; he was just acting this way to not arouse suspicion. Spotting Eytukan sitting on his usual throne, the old Clan-leader looked half deranged. Bloodshot eyes, face flushed with anger, his usual deep voice was ragged and on edge. “This is going to be very, very difficult” -- Eytukan yelled angrily at his fellow clan-members, rage flowing like a river from every pore on his body. Every thought was pure hate towards Jake and Tsu’tey, at how they could be so lucky, how it was unjust, unfair. “They won’t be together.” Eytukan growled to himself -- Tsu awoke from a deep sleep, reaching out for where he thought Jake would be. He wasn’t there. Tsu was suddenly wide awake; Jake seemed so distant lately, barely eaten in days. Tsu’tey knew about Jake’s nightmares, he could hear him calling out in the night and see him reaching for people that weren’t there. It chilled him to the core to think that Jake was unhappy. Pulling himself out of the hammock, he wandered over to Grace standing in the corner. “Grace, where’s Jake?” “How do you expect me to know? He probably wandered off in one of his midnight stupors” “Grace, please. I’m very worried for him.” “You’re worried about him? I’m worried about the rest of my friends, who are not as lucky as us, without Avatars, they WILL die.” Tsu’tey sighed, Grace was still very angry about leaving Hells Gate. “Please....” Tsu stared a hole into the ground, feeling his eyes well up with tears. He was very worried, and very lonely. “He walked off that way, said he needed some time alone. I’m sorry Tsu, I’m just...I’m as unhappy about this situation as you are; we need to be able to work together if we’re going to get through this. You ok?” Tsu looked up, expecting to see sarcasm flowing from Grace’s eyes. Instead, there was none. There was only sorrow and genuine concern. Tsu’tey smiled and said: “Srane, I’ll be ok. It is this place, it saddens me greatly.” “I know. It gets me down too. Now go on, go look for your Jake” Grace smirked, and lay down on her hammock. -- Jake sat alone, legs dangling precariously over the edge of the cliff. He felt cold inside. As if to emphasize his point, thunder raked the sky, and specks of rain splattered his face. He thought of all the people that had died, Trudy, Neytiri, and all the innocent people. He had fought with some of the best warriors and people he had ever known, fought with them, bled with them. Now they cast him aside like this? For loving another male? Jake had thought the Na’vi were different than humanity. Maybe he was wro— “JAKE!” Why were they outcast? Why couldn’t they understand? Was it all pointle— “JAKE!” Jake fell backwards, the sky spinning. Vision blurring in and out of focus. A blue figure grabbed him and gently lowered him onto the ground, muffled sounds of sorrow washed over him, steadily growing further and further away. He couldn’t see, couldn’t feel. Further away. The sound was dying. Further away....Further Away. Nothing but purple fog engulfed him. (TBC) Phew, that was a good one. Now, I'm expecting Fkeu'itan to come to kill me for more now. I must rest. <3 I told you I'd be taking it places! Written to: Story of The Year - Time Goes On
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06-17-2010, 11:38 PM
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You expected right.
Gimme an M! Gimme an O! Gimme an A! Gimme an R! What does it spell? MOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR! I love where this is going Jack, I really do. Keep up the awesome work! P.S. No rest for the wicked they say and that's exactly what this is. 
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06-18-2010, 12:13 AM
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Thought'd it would get you. Woooo 1,000 views and 99 replies! Thanks a million guys! <333  **EDIT** Just realized this post hit it up to 100 - 1,000 <3
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06-18-2010, 04:08 PM
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O_o that was awesome
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hahaha, yeah :p BUT IT ROOOOCKKS
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