[WIP] Children of Eywa

[electrosphere11]

*crickets*

[X.,.Pandora.,.X]

*crickets*

[Neytiri.]

Sorry guys, Left you waiting for a few months but it's here, The reason i couldn't post it earlier is because I tried to make the story to complicated, the next chapter got to confusing and I kept re writing it. Well Imma keep it simple like love should always be *hint hint wink wink* lol see you in a few

[Neytiri.]

Ok here it is

oh and just a warning, It's remotely sexually graphic, The word graphic makes it sound extreme but I don't know what other word to use lol

[Neytiri.]

*Children Of Eywa: Chapter #3*

As I stepped into the village I could sense something was wrong, I could hear Rai’uk frantically calling my name as if something had gone horribly wrong. In a second I was in his arms kissing him passionately, I could see the tears welling up in his eyes as I ran towards him. My words caught in my throat from just seeing him, He was so handsome, It felt like I hadn’t seen him in days, I wanted him more than anything, I wanted to feel his touch, to experience his kiss, I missed him even though I had only been separate from him for what seemed like ten minutes.

“I thought I had lost you.” He stammered.

“How could you have lost me?” I asked confused.

“You where gone for five hours, we found pools of blood on the way back and didn’t know whether you had gotten hurt on the way back or not” He said just as confused.

“That’s not possible, I left the den 15 minutes ago, how could have that much time passed without me knowing?” I asked stunned.

As I looked back slowly retracing my steps through the forest I came upon one unnerving realization, I had no recollection of anything. From the time I had stepped out of the den to the time I reached our village it was just a vague blur of passing plants and animals. It was almost as if something had gently reached into my mind and removed the memories. While this was something I should not have taken lightly at all I couldn’t tear my ears away from Rai’uk. He was so…so… Beautiful. His rippling stomach, the neon blood slowly pulsing in his veins, He was irresistible.

I could feel every muscle throbbing in his body as he held me tightly. It was as if he was pulling me in, I couldn’t break his gaze his misty blue eyes swallowing the very essence of my soul. I had to have him. As I tore my eyes away from his and kissed him deeply I could feel our very beings begin to mold into one, his lips where so soft, so gentle, it was ecstasy just kissing him.
I could see myself in his eyes as he pulled me on top of him; our body’s together seemed perfect. As I kissed him gently from chest downward I could feel him slowly growing harder underneath me, an instant sign he was enjoying what I was doing to him.

He was already moaning softly as I took him into me, I couldn’t help myself from screaming, I knew everyone would hear us but I didn’t care the sound of him moaning along was enough to make me climax. As he pushed deeper and deeper inside of me I could feel my eyes begin to water with pleasure, I moaned loader and loader as each second passed by.

I began to ride him harder and faster, I wanted more, I wanted all of him. Every fiber in his being I had to have at this exact moment. Without him I was nothing, the more I thought about this the faster I rode him taking him deeper and deeper refusing to let this be the end of something so beautiful. The look in his eyes as I mode love with him was like nothing I’d ever seen; He looked so fierce, so hungry for more.

I screamed as he pulled me off of him abruptly, He moved so swiftly it didn’t even register that we had switched positions. The fact that he could manipulate me so easily yet was so gentle made me tingle all over.

I screamed in ecstasy as he drove himself into me, the pleasure I was feeling was becoming wilder and wilder with each breath I took. I was surprised I could even control myself at this point, breaths becoming shorter, moans loader, kisses deeper, we where almost there, I wanted him to take me all the way more than anything at this point. Digging my nails into his back and clinging tighter than I ever had I lost all control, screaming in bliss I let myself climax, I could feel my body pulse with pleasure I knew everything would be fine as long as my love was with me, Anything and everything would be okay as long as I had him.

Slowly I let myself collapse in his arms; kissing him lovingly we slowly drifted away into another land, a realm where nothing mattered but holding each other, living in each other’s kiss. Why couldn’t life always be this perfect?

[Marley]

That. Was. Amazing.

Very VERY well done! Quite intense!

[X.,.Pandora.,.X]

o.O

[Neytiri.]

Originally Posted by Marley

That. Was. Amazing.

Very VERY well done! Quite intense!

Thank you! xD The next chapter will be up in a little while, I'm going to try and post them more frequently know. I need to get some food in mah belly before I write Ch.4 so it'll be a bit ^_^

[electrosphere11]

Nice job

[Human No More]

Nicely written, although your post before made it sound a lot more graphic than that was

[Neytiri.]

Originally Posted by Human No More

Nicely written, although your post before made it sound a lot more graphic than that was

xD Thanks ^_^ This post actually made me sigh in relief I was expecting the next message to be a massive hate fest or something

You have officially made me not have to worry before logging on to TOS <3 *hugs*

[The Man in Black]

Originally Posted by Neytiri.

Why couldn’t life always be this perfect?

SIGH...

Only one word to describe chapter 3: EPIC!