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04-07-2011, 08:58 PM
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Wow!! This is am-az-ing :O
Just one thing.. perhaps make her shoulders a bit wider? They look kinda 'humanish' atm.. the Na'vi's shoulders are a bit wider than ours. It might just be the position her arms are in making it seem that way though, so i could be wrong  Anyways, can't wait to see it finished! 
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04-07-2011, 09:39 PM
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Thx again for the feedback, you guys have some sharp eyes!
Made some small adjustments, below a quick render (went a little further then this even). Some things are also related to the different pose, my model is standing so stiff, kinda like she had a few redbulls too many  Later any pose will be possible tho.Also its not a 100% copy so some things look perfect from one angle but slightly off from another, oh well. Next to the real Neytiri she's more like a cousin that looks alot like her or something i guess 
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04-07-2011, 10:50 PM
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Wow. This is looking really good, fierox! Honestly, there are so many things that are right about your model it's hard to get picky. It might be fun to try to emulate the lighting in that left shot and see what unfolds.
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04-08-2011, 12:18 AM
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@ Prowler and Becca, below an updated version with your suggestions, head is a bit smaller and tweaked and the shoulders and neck are a bit firmer.
Its all pretty subtle but i think its an inprovement 
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04-08-2011, 03:33 AM
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That does look like a nice improvement to me. I suppose now the only thing to do is to work on the details.
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04-08-2011, 04:55 PM
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Amazing
Can't wait to see the whole finished model
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04-09-2011, 07:08 PM
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Yeah, thats a definite improvement
It looks sooo good right now, can't wait to see what you'll do with it next
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04-11-2011, 08:52 AM
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Its realy very good... But i think she needs some emotions on the face
Good work!
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04-12-2011, 12:01 AM
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yeah its all about the details now, finishing alot of little things atm.
Also added a few things like the arrow protector on her arm and a set of teeth, inner mouth and tongue. Not super detailed but close enough, dont think ill be doing extreme close up of that @ blackrainbow, youre very right she does need some emotion on her face! Cant wait to get started on that. For now her face is very neutral on purpose, as sort of a base pose of her face. Will be alot of fun to set up all the different emotions. Found sort of a mood board picture made by someone here i think with various emotions so ill copy those and imagine the rest. 
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04-12-2011, 03:48 AM
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Hooray!! Great progress tsmukan!
I can't wait to see the emotions.
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