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Old 02-23-2011, 10:52 PM
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Default A poem for Neytiri...
I decided to try and write a poem for princess Neytiri te Tskaha Mo'at’ite of the omaticaya... i never wrote one so...

You’re beautiful
Your eyes are big and yellow
Easy to get lost in them
I have done it countless times
Your hair upbraided or braided
Has to be the best hair in the world
I just want to be close to you
Forever and ever
As long as I will live
Take my hand
Let’s walk and never stop
And never look back
Your my love
I love you
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Old 02-24-2011, 06:47 AM
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Old 02-24-2011, 02:25 PM
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I love it... clearly shows so much love for her...
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Old 02-25-2011, 04:57 PM
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I love it... clearly shows so much love for her...
thanks for your comment aswell i really find it hard to put my feelings in word this was the best i could do...
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Old 02-26-2011, 10:51 AM
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Beautifully. I'm sure, that she would be delighted.
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Old 02-27-2011, 12:07 AM
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That was great prowler, I likes it!
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Old 02-27-2011, 02:29 AM
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Neytiri would be proud :*)

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Old 02-27-2011, 10:12 AM
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